COP - Practical Response Proposal

Based on the skeletal notes i had regarding what little of an essay i had made, i attended the studio session and attempted to write up a Practical Response proposal for it, and also made an mind map using the limited quotes and experts from my 'essay' notes to try and help stimulate some ideas for the practical submission.

With not having a whole lot of essay work to assist me, the essay map hasn't given me a load of possibilities.